http://impulsereader.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] impulsereader.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aelfgyfu_mead 2012-07-14 06:37 am (UTC)

Douglas POV = love.

You are really getting the funny across right out of the gate - good show.

She does women...I'm not even sure what that means... nice touch indeed.

Douglas decided to put him out of his misery, or at least his slight bafflement. awwww

Martin as well as Douglas snapped to give full attention to Arthur. I love this - so funny!

You've really got their voices all down completely - Douglas baiting Martin and both of them being gentle with Arthur - well done, this is really lovely.

You have such a great voice!"

Douglas smiled tolerantly. "Yes. Yes, I do."
I really could hear that in my head - hee!

"She did mean headwords, right?'

"Sure!" Then came the inevitable pause. "What's a headword?"

Martin sighed.
Again, playing right out of the show at me. By the way, you've done an especially good job of adapting a radio show to the written word - it is translating perfectly.

This is really entertaining. A wonderful sort of CP outtake which feels exactly like an episode.

Thank you so much for running with the idea!

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