Oh, I finally had the chance to read this properly, and it is so much FUN!

Dixon! Balinsky! Casey giving himself away by letting Balinksy babble and saluting Jack, hee! The great Teal'c maneuver of Starting People into Submission!

I love your Dixon, I love your outsider POV, and this was easily accessible to someone like me who knows nothing about Chuck. Thanks for a great read!