Yay!! I've really enjoyed your pacing and your character development in this story. I like the new OC and how you've addressed some of the glaring idiocies seen in the show. (Standard TV trope #3456; don't EVER keep things to yourself.. Especially when the thing in question relates to possible conspiracies.)
Oh, and as a hat tip to you, I'll share that my own new OC was in part inspired by what you did to Stephen. I decided after reading the first couple chapters of this that it'd be enjoyable to write a disabled character who was a strong person and make him fit in and hold his own against the existing ARC personnel. So in a little way, Christian Sayer (and I, his writer( have you to thank for his existence.
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Oh, and as a hat tip to you, I'll share that my own new OC was in part inspired by what you did to Stephen. I decided after reading the first couple chapters of this that it'd be enjoyable to write a disabled character who was a strong person and make him fit in and hold his own against the existing ARC personnel. So in a little way, Christian Sayer (and I, his writer( have you to thank for his existence.